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Heheh this is a suuuuppper fUNnyyy JoKEEeee
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Thought I'd make his winter outfit for good measure.
I bought a pair Green Plaid Shorts and this was the first thing that popped into my mind...
Feel like I'm already getting better at drawing ribbon ties :3 but still not great... >>
my friends insist on making a hear me out cake, but to quote my friend:
hear me out is not just âi wanna fuck thatâ itâs âunconventional desires that you must be heard out upon to try and convince people that it is reasonableâ
But most of my tasted I like to think are just conventionally attractive and mostly sane anime men?? Only one of my fictional crushes falls down that category tho and that image has been engraved on me ig
Gill, character by @buddycakeartistworld
since you have a very simplified art style I couldn't do anything realistic, hope that's ok! this was fun to do though as I don't usually draw really cartoony things
still went with my usual super rendered shading lol rendering is my favourite part of the art process I just can't NOT do it
again thank you for the art!!
valxxiaartz i'm gonna work on yours next! hopefully you don't have to wait too long! (but depending on how much work I have to do it may take until the end of the weekend)
I've rewatched the show more recently and noticed some new details, so I've decided to redo my first post on this blog.
Kim is known for saving the world and helping people with things like park cleanups and cats stuck in trees.
But she is also known to put her own desires before her friends, even if it causes them harm.
And that is not something a good person does.
These are not "mistakes" because Kim is doing them intentionally.
And it's not a one-time thing:
Kim forges an application in Ronâs name before she even brings up the idea of working there to him.
When he's upset with her for doing that, she uses the puppy dog pout, which he explicitly states she knows he can't resist, to get him to take the job.
She refuses to be supportive of him or happy for him when he turns out to be good at it, to the point of refusing to do the job at all.
I will give Kim credit for apologizing for her jealousy, but she never apologizes for manipulating him to take the job in the first place.
She forces Ron into a haircut, despite the fact that even her own mother had reservations about it.
When Ron tells her he hates it and why, she feigns sympathy, steals his hat, and runs through the halls yelling that he got a new haircut.
When Ron starts to embrace the new haircut and becomes popular, she hates it. But despite his popularity, he's not a jerk.
He didn't abandon Rufus, Rufus wandered off and Ron gently chastised him for it.
She was only upset because Ron was starting to change into someone who cared about hair care and appearances.
(Which, if that wasn't her goal with the new haircut, then what was her goal?)
She apologizes for saying Ron needed a new haircut, but not for the lengths she went to to force him into one, nor for her contempt for him after he started to embrace the haircut.
At the end, she tries to tell him that it's what's on the inside that counts, but it's very hypocritical since she was the one who wanted him to change in the first place.
Kim locks Ron in the janitor closet, though semi-unintentionally; she wasn't intending to lock him in there, but she did shove him back in when he was trying to leave.
She ignores Wadeâs attempts at reaching her, even though Wade never contacts her unless itâs important.
(I will give Kim some leeway here, as a teenage girl deserves one night to herself.)
She also expressed no concern at Ron being missing, nor does she seem to even notice he's missing.
We also have no idea how long Ron spent in that closet, but even just an hour is too long.
(Also, that is a really big janitor's closet. The ones at my high school were closet sized, not room sized.)
When Kim's told the bracelet is armor that grows when she lies, she keeps lying, even though it was probably unnecessary. Her parents and Ron would have been understanding about her wanting to go to a party with her crush.
Her actions led to her destroying Monique's garage door, which probably landed Monique in trouble.
And though Kim does get grounded for lying, she doesn't get in trouble for putting others in danger.
(Probably because Wade's the only one who could confirm that she knew she was putting others in danger.)
She uses the Neural-Compliance Chips on her brothers, after saying that just making them would be unethical.
After an entire episode about how bad they are.
After being a victim of them herself.
Itâs meant to be a joke.
This is not the kind of thing anyone should joke about.
Kim thinks telling Ron that he might stand a chance with a girl is "fudging".
At this point, they know so little about Zita that they think her name is Annie.
There's no reason to believe Ron wouldn't stand a chance except for having a low opinion of Ron in general.
They also had their conversation about it while sitting across the table from Ron at Bueno Nacho, so there's a good chance he heard them.
And despite this belief that he doesn't stand a chance, she spends the rest of the episode angrily telling him that there are no rules to try to encourage him to ask her out.
Ron's steps of taking care of Rufus aren't just long because he's an exotic animal, those are also things Ron learned about taking care of Rufus from experience.
He also refers to Rufus as his son in "Mind Games", so Kim's disregard for how to take care of Rufus is extra mean given that Rufus clearly means a lot to Ron.
Not only does Rufus accidentally eat the chip due to Kim's negligence, she doesn't even notice it's missing until Wade tells her it's broadcasting a signal from inside Rufus.
And she lies to Ron about all of it on multiple occasions. I can understand some of them, since she was dealing with an emergency, but this is the kind of thing pet owners like to know about.
Kim and Monique were both arranging âaccidentalâ run-ins with Hirotaka to ask him out, but Kimâs the only one who had Wade track Hirotakaâs movements to do it.
I know Monique couldnât do that, but the point is, Kim took it to creepy stalker levels for a guy sheâs known for less than a week.
(I'm also interested in the fact that Monique was confident she could take Kim in a fight.)
Though Kim and Bonnie both sabotage each other, Kim started it.
She unplugged Bonnieâs alarm clock, supposedly to charge the Kimmunicator, but there was another available outlet that she couldâve used.
She also uses all the hot water in the showers so Bonnie canât have any, which wouldnât harm just Bonnie but anyone else who may need to use the showers after Bonnie.
And she refuses to take any of Ron's feelings seriously.
Even if Gil hadn't actually been up to something, Ron was still stuck sharing a cabin with a guy who used to bully him and had attacked him and the squad at some point. He has every right to be uncomfortable with it, but Kim keeps dismissing his feelings because she's too focused on sabotaging Bonnie so she could win a plastic stick that's been painted gold.
Dr. Lurkin apologizes to Ron for not taking him seriously, but Kim doesn't.
Despite getting on Ron's case for cheating in "Naked Genius", which is completely fair, Kim had no problems using her newfound super strength for gym class or cheerleading, which is unfair and hypocritical of her.
Though I agree the "doofy" and "stupido" thing was embarrassing, coupons shouldn't be embarrassing, especially since Kim isn't offering to pay for it herself.
I can understand how the kids' menu thing was embarrassing, especially since Kim wouldn't want to order a kids' meal. However, she should just let Ron order of the kids' menu if he wants to.
The whole plot around getting jobs would have been better if Kim was getting one to pay for dates herself, not to "encourage" Ron to get one to pay for dates.
And then Ron decides Kim deserves better and starts looking for a job himself anyways.
I could understand being upset about not getting to see the designs, but Monique signed an NDA and would be risking not just her job but her future career in the fashion industry if she told Kim. And having Wade check the contract for loopholes is obsessive and couldâve landed them all in legal trouble.
Hassling Monique to break an NDA and trying to get Wade to find a loophole so Monique can tell her is the kind of thing Kim would've gotten fired for.
(Also, there is no way Wade was just given a copy of that NDA, so he's definitely in trouble if Monique ever decides to snitch on him.)
We learn in "A Sitch in Time" that Kim always wanted a little sister, so it's no surprise that she took to Hana immediately.
But Ron's life was changed against his will without warning while he was at school, so a little sympathy would be expected from his girlfriend. Especially since the attic isn't as nice or comfortable as his old bedroom.
When Yori needs Ron's help on a mission, Kim refuses to let him go because she doesn't trust Ron alone with Yori, even though he's never given her any reason to think he'd be disloyal and Yori had requested help from him specifically.
I know theyâre criminals who are behind bars, but that doesnât make it right for Kim to use The Fashionistasâ design without their permission.
Monique didn't know it was The Fashionistas' design, and Rufus is a six-year-old rodent, so he wouldn't know any better.
But Kim did know it was their design.
I know they wanted her to bust them out, and I'm not saying she should, but it doesn't seem right for her to use their design without their permission.
(It's also kind of a disappointment that Kim is wearing a design made by The Fashionistas instead of Monique, her fashionable best friend who helped her put them behind bars in the first place. That would've been so much cooler.)
At no point should Kim and Ron have been trying to get Monique to date Wade.
(A more realistic way of handling that would be to have them tease her about it for a bit, not seriously asking her to consider it.)
Also, Kim didn't actually need to hit Monique with the Cupid Ray just because she "didn't have time" to deal with Monique being upset. She was in a car, she could've driven away.
Because she did, Monique refused to leave Wade's side and ended up on a mission that she would have never gone on if she had been herself at the time.
If this show handled relationships a bit more realistically, people would at least be mad at Kim for her actions, and stay mad. Kim being a hero doesnât excuse such behavior, nor does her being a teenager.
As an action hero, Kim is great; cool, calm, collected, and always victorious.
But as a person, Kim is controlling, competitive, manipulative, insensitive, and more focused on her own wants than others around her.
And those aren't qualities someone who's meant to be a role model should have.
I donât intend to comment on every episode, just the ones I havenât talked about yet or the ones I feel need to be given more in-depth discussion. Letâs begin:
âTick-Tick-Tickâ - First episode, not much to complain about here, but I do have one thing that irks me; the detention gang are never seen or mentioned again, with the exception of maybe Mike, as a guy who looks just like him is seen on the football team in a later episode. He is not addressed by name, however, so Iâm not going to assume itâs Mike. The point of the episode was that Kim learns the detention gang are not all that bad, but then theyâre never seen or mentioned again. Theyâre not even in the background. It kind of defeats the purpose of the lesson.
I also feel like this episode would have been a good chance to play into Kimâs âdriven to excelâ traits and have her hate the idea of detention because sheâs afraid of how it will affect her future, and she learns one detention wonât ruin her future. You know, a reason for thinking detention is for losers, instead of just her being a cheerleader.
âBueno Nachoâ - I did mention in a previous post that I hate that Kim forged an application for Ron before ever talking to him about it. Honestly, they couldâve just had Kim entice Ron to take the job by mentioning some kind of benefits i.e. employee discount, one free meal while on shift. There was no reason for Kim to unilaterally make the decision, and she seems majorly controlling for doing so. Your protagonistâs mistakes should come from a lack of knowledge, not a lack of consideration. You can teach people to communicate, you canât teach them to care.
âAttack of the Killer Bebesâ - I wish the creators had delved more into Kimâs feelings. She thinks Ron being a cheerleader would be mortifying, and she hates the idea of him as the mascot. But we never learn why. Thereâs a line at the beginning that would indicate Kim just wanted something for herself, but the creators donât expand on that. Instead, we get Kim just insulting Ron for the rest of the episode. It would have been more interesting if it was about Kim struggling to keep something for herself without Ron, and learning that even with Ron as the mascot, cheerleading will still always be her thing. Your protagonist should have deep thoughts and feelings that get explored, not just hinted at.
âThe New Ronâ - One of my most hated episodes for the way Kim treated Ron, but my rewrite would probably fix it. Ron agrees to a new haircut to appease Kim, and tries to like it but heâs miserable and he stays miserable. Kim learns she can be too pushy sometimes and needs to lay off, and Ron learns his best friend cares more about his feelings than his appearance, so itâs okay to say no to her. Your hero shouldnât be causing harm to others just because she wants to; thatâs not a hero, thatâs a villain.
âNumber Oneâ - A few options for rewrites; Kim actually tries to prove sheâs the better captain instead of just expecting Bonnie to fail on her own, or Bonnie stays captain and we get to explore how Kim handles not being in charge. Your character isnât skilled and talented if she has everything handed to her instead of working for it.
Also, it would be nice if Will was actually competent, instead of taking credit for the mission. Give Kim an actual rival. Seriously, a highly-trained government agent isnât on par with an amateur? Itâs ridiculous. Your female protagonist isnât good if you have to dumb down the world to make her shine.
âSink or Swimâ - Minor change; with how big Barkin is, and his military experience, he shouldâve made more noise while being abducted. We couldâve had a shadow drag him off while he tells Kim to warn the others. That wouldâve played into the horror movie parody quite nicely.
âCrushâ - I feel like instead of Kim ignoring a call from Wade that was definitely important because Wade doesnât make social calls, she shouldâve just not gotten a call. I mean, how would Wade even know Ron was trapped in the closet anyways? Ron doesnât have a Kimmunicator. It wouldnât change much to be honest, and it also wouldnât have Kim ignoring an urgent attempt at communication.
âOctober 31stâ - Kim should take more precautions with the bracelet. Maybe it gets stuck to her wrist because the tweebs grab it and it gets stuck to her wrist in the ensuing fight. Thereâs also the issue of lying, but we could just have her nervous about spending time with Josh and having that be enough to set off the armor. That way, itâs basically the same plot, but without Kim being thoughtless, reckless, and deliberately misleading everyone she cares about.
âThe Twin Factorâ - Honestly, I would take out the whole âgagâ about Kim using mind control on her brothers. The whole point of the episode is that mind control is wrong and bad, but the point gets muted when our hero is doing it to children. Iâm not sure what gag I would replace it with, but nothing that jokes about mind control. I like that Kimâs parents were upset, but they shouldâve been more upset. Outraged, even. And Kim shouldâve faced actual consequences.
âJob Unfairâ - Iâm not sure this episode had a lesson. If it was meant to be âall jobs are importantâ then the lesson is pointless by having the âjanitorâ revealed to actually be a Canadian spy. Instead, we could have Kim decide to focus on her work-study anyways, and learn how to disable the weather machine by sheer coincidence, because the janitor is an actual janitor and not secretly a spy. As for Ronâs mentor, it could be revealed that the spy had been trying to get to Kim, but she was already taken by the janitor so he went to Ron instead.
âGrudge Matchâ - This episode had a scene where Ron mentions people might think he and Kim were on a date. Instead of using this as a moment to hint at Kim and Ron ending up together, Kim mocks and insults Ron for that statement. We could have Kim and Ron nervously discussing whether people think of them as a couple, before Kim (or Wade) brings them back to focus, but Kim mocking and insulting Ron for insinuating people might think they date is not a good way to hint at the endgame ship.
Also, I feel like instead of Kim âfudgingâ by telling Ron he might stand a chance with Zita, we should have her actually believe it could happen. This is a guy she supposedly develops romantic feelings for later, but instead of hinting at that, she apparently thinks heâs so much of a loser that even a girl none of them know anything about could do better.
âThe Ron Factorâ - I understand they had to change the ending of the episode because it was too sexist, but this episode chronologically takes place after âA Sitch in Timeâ, where we learn Ron is essential to Kimâs success (though no one remembers that timeline so Iâll cut them some slack there) and Ron defeated the villain this time. Not Kim, Ron. If they didnât want it to seem like Ron was the secret to Kimâs success, they shouldnât have made that a plot point of the movie, nor should they have Ron defeating the villain. Kim did almost nothing in this episode aside from telling Ron he was getting a big head (which he was) and complaining about GJ thinking Ron was the secret to her success (again, he was).
âAdventures in Rufus-Sittingâ - Iâve talked about this episode before, so my rewrite is simple; have Kim take actual precautions with the microchip. We could still have Rufus accidentally eat it; maybe while looking for a snack he finds it and eats it. But Kim took no precautions with the top-secret microchip she was meant to guard, and that is seriously disappointing. If your female protagonist wonât take basic precautions with things sheâs supposed to guard, sheâs not a good guardian.
âExchangeâ - When Kim decides she likes Hirotaka, she has Wade track his movements to arrange an âaccidentalâ run-in with him to ask him out. Sheâs known him for less than a week and is already stalking him. Itâs creepy and obsessive and this needs to not happen. Honestly, that whole scene could go like this; Kim returns from a mission, notices Hirotaka, panics, plays cool, decides to ask him out, continues as canon. If your female character is stalking her crush, itâs not funny, itâs creepy.
Interesting to note: Hirotaka looks a lot like Will Duâs original concept Ken Du.
âQueen Bebeâ - Honestly, I do have complaints about this episode, and Iâve mentioned it in a previous post, but Iâm not actually sure how Iâd go about rewriting it. Kimâs inability to fulfill her obligations (that she volunteered for) is not only disappointing but also letting down her school. I can kind of understand her refusal to ask for help, especially from Bonnie, but at the very least, clubs and committees should be hesitant to let her join in the future because of this.
âHidden Talentâ - Not cool of Ron to sign Kim up for the talent show without talking to her about it first, but it definitely wasnât cool of Kim to threaten Ron with physical violence over it. He might not have seemed afraid, but that doesnât make it okay.
Honestly, it would be very in character for Kim to sign herself up because of anger and pride, so there was no need for Ron to do it.
âReturn to Wannaweepâ - Kim sabotages Bonnie, her own teammate, just because she wants a plastic stick painted gold. A stick she admits to only wanting so Bonnie canât have it. Sure, Kimâs competitive. But this kind of competitiveness, sabotaging her own teammate to make herself stand out more, would get her kicked off the squad. Obviously, if they want Kim and Bonnie sabotaging each other, they should have Bonnie start it. Your heroine doesnât get to be called a role model when sheâs starting conflicts for her own personal interests.
Also, despite Gil having tried something evil before, Kim refuses to take any of Ronâs concerns about him seriously because sheâs too preoccupied with her rivalry with Bonnie. A heroine ignoring potential danger because she doesnât care is not a good heroine.
âBlushâ - I can understand Kim wanting to go on a date with Josh, but he wouldâve understood Kim needing to stay home for her own safety. She was at risk of literally disappearing.
âOh Boyzâ - Sure, everyone stopped liking the Oh Boyz, but the timing implies Kim stopped liking them specifically because Ron started liking them. I just feel like thereâs too much of that in this show; Ronâs interests being âuncoolâ or âembarrassingâ.
âRewriting Historyâ - This episode introduced interesting new layers to the characters and their relationships, except it didnât because it was all a dream. I hate that. Honestly, I feel like the episode should have just ended with Kim saving Drakken and Shego and clearing her great-auntâs name. No âit was all a dreamâ shenanigans.
âShowdown at the Crooked Dâ - Kim tricked Ron into going. He told her he wanted to laze about for the summer, she invited him to a place called The Lazy C, and then deliberately didnât tell him until after they arrived and he had no way to back out that it was a working ranch. A lie by omission is still a lie. Your female hero shouldnât be doing this to her friends.
"Emotion Sicknessâ - Another episode that couldâve hinted at Kim and Ron getting together, but instead Ron seemed uncomfortable with the whole idea. Nervous. Terrified. It didnât seem like he wanted to be in a relationship with her. Having one character be uncomfortable with the idea of dating another is not a good way to hint at a ship.
"Bondingâ - Mostly I hate that both Bonnie and Barkin were given character development, and then itâs gone for the rest of the series.
âBad Boyâ - Another episode to hint at a ship, and it didnât do a good job. Having both characters be uncomfortable with the idea of dating each other doesnât imply a ship either.
âTeam Impossibleâ - As I mentioned, most of my frustration with this episode comes from the reason they gave for wanting Kim out of the business; profit. There are so many valid reasons, and Team Impossible couldâve been mentors. If you need to make the professionals incompetent for your character to stand out, your character isnât good enough.
âAnd the Mole Rat Will Be CGIâ - Honestly, my big issue here is that Kim, once again, is ignoring Ronâs feelings on something that will affect him.
âSo The Dramaâ - I made a whole post about this, so Iâll be brief. Getting Kim and Ron together by introducing a âperfectâ guy for Kim and then removing him as an option completely is lazy writing. I understand it was supposed to be the end of the series, but while we see a lot of Ron pining over Kim, we donât see any of Kim possibly having feelings for Ron. The implication is that, if Eric were still an option, Kim and Ron wouldnât be together. Thatâs not true love, thatâs Ron being Kimâs rebound guy.
âThe Big Jobâ - Kim complains about Ron using coupons to fund their dates, to high end expensive restaurants, but she never offers to pay. She is asking for more from Ron than he is able to give. And she, once again, has things literally handed to her. In this case, Monique literally gives her a job just so she could inspire Ron to get one.
âFashion Victimâ - I find it hard to believe Kim didnât know she was risking Moniqueâs and Wadeâs futures by trying to get them help her break the NDA Monique signed. She has worked on top-secret projects before; sheâs definitely signed a few of those. Your heroine shouldnât be risking others for her own gain.
âGrande Size Meâ - The movie this episode was based off of has been proven to have been faked. This whole episode would need to be rewritten.
TW: This episode contains scenes that would be triggering for people with body image issues, eating disorders, or fears of Kaiju.
I did have more thoughts, but they felt too nitpicky. I tried to stick to the ones I had major problems with, and bolded the advice I would give on how to avoid some of those problems.